integreated hour

So far i have decided I'm going to write a short story or a essay or memoir depending if i find enough evidence. I am not done with i am project. so far i have the subject my biography is done. I am still searching for evidence of the lack of education given to none English speaking students. I would like my partner to critique my outline of the project  and tell me which one she or he finds more intriguing and thinks will get my point across. I am done with my biography because when i thought i was done i decided to add how i relate to the subject of my project and explain why i think my subject is so important. I need to go over it and make sure that everything i wrote on it is perfect and well put together.